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times like this,
moments of serenity
in the early morning
Make me appreciate
And Love you all the more
©2002-2009 ~crownlessking
:iconcrownlessking:

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A love poem :) (Smile)

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:iconmentyrosa:
it's good poetry, but it's nothing I haven't heard before. kind of boring theme, but maybe you were going for the familiarity since you titled it "timeless"

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"No, no. You're coming off all honest and observant. You know. Antisocial." -Jane from Daria.
:icondemonical:
so short. itd be great if you expanded on this because the feelings are obviously there. this is nice and although brief, nonetheless good. you can never say the words of love too many times. and it may sound redundant, but its something that so many of us have felt and written about that it just so happens that that is what comes out. im sure if you expanded itd gain originality, so go for it. =) (Smile) nice though.

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patriotism has killed our brain cells and perverted negligence has injected us with a false sense of pride. you dont have to breathe american in order to belong.

*demonical
:iconmillenniumbuger:
wow short and right to the point i love it!

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Any one could take a picture, Yet it takes a true artist to capture a moment in time
:iconnienna080:
Hmmm, well you know I love it! :) (Smile) Short and sweet.

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-nienna

Here I am expecting just a little bit
Too much from the wounded
But I see, See through it all,
See through, And see you.
So I threw you the obvious
Do you see what occurs behind the
Eyes of a fallen angel
Eyes of a tragedy
Well, oh well

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